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CC Refs: Jessica and Duncan

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My characters for my audition for Chernobyl Curs.

Name: Jessica
Breed Base: Norwich terrier
Age: 2 (Dog years)
Gender: Girl
Abilities: Whenever she is badly injured, Jess' claws and fangs extend twice their size to help her defend herself. Whenever her claws are "extended" it makes it harder for her to walk normally and she often stumbles over them as a result.
Strengths: Jess uses her small body to fit into places that most dogs would be unable to get into. Her teeth and claws are surprisingly sharp for her breed.
Weaknesses: Jessica cannot travel very long distances due to her short legs. She is also near-sighted.
Personality: Jessica has the typical small dog personality, but once she learns to trust someone she will be loyal to them.
History: Jessica was born in a dark alley, and when she was six months old she lost her mother and siblings. Since then she has been trying to survive out on the streets by herself.
Likes: Being with her friends, water
Dislikes: Being alone, Hot places, walking or running long distances
Other: One day Jessica met a hairless chinese crested named Duncan. He tells her about the tournament and together the two set off.

Name: Duncan
Breed Base: Chinese Crested (Hairless)
Age: 2 (Dog years)
Gender: Boy
Abilities: Nothing Special.
Strengths: Duncan is really fast and cunning.
Weaknesses: Duncan's skin is sensitive to heat and the cold. Plus if he gets hurt during a fight, there is no fur to help cusion him from any blows.
Personality: He is too cocky for his own good, and he also considers himself a ladies man.
History: Nothing really exciting has ever happened to him.
Likes: Jessica, the ladies.
Dislikes: Annoying dogs, hot or cold places.

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Here's our review;

Jessica's ability is a little confusing. Her claws and fangs get huge in "dire" situations. What exactly quantifies "dire"? That's a little vague and could use some explaining. Also, she should probably have at least one more weakness to balance her ability as well as her strengths.

For Duncan, you say his skin is sensitive to "many things" and leave it at that. We need you to say exactly what his skin is sensitive to so your opponents can utilize this knowledge in their rounds.

If you can make these modifications you should be good to go.